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I’d trade all the lights in the sky
For the change to say goodbye
No chance of backing down
We’re wide awake but still asleep
It all changes to fast,
Will innocent last
Like an atomic blast
The pain we mask
All we see is red
Hanging by a thread
We’re shutting down
Looking for a cause to fight for
The mirror tells me it’s not enough
Dose my life validate me
Or dose the world just hate me?
Days fly by with no measure
All the pain that we treasure
Do we even care, are we still there
Inside our minds?
Graves without names
Playing pass the blame
Where will it end?
Times running out
We reaching out
Asking for help
No one answers
No one hears
Trade between reality and sleep
The ideals we try to keep
Crashing down, underground
Too late we’re already fallen to deep
Between life and death
What have we left?
But splintered dreams
The ghost of ourselves
The loss of lives
Injustice thrives
Will there never be an end?
For the change to say goodbye
No chance of backing down
We’re wide awake but still asleep
It all changes to fast,
Will innocent last
Like an atomic blast
The pain we mask
All we see is red
Hanging by a thread
We’re shutting down
Looking for a cause to fight for
The mirror tells me it’s not enough
Dose my life validate me
Or dose the world just hate me?
Days fly by with no measure
All the pain that we treasure
Do we even care, are we still there
Inside our minds?
Graves without names
Playing pass the blame
Where will it end?
Times running out
We reaching out
Asking for help
No one answers
No one hears
Trade between reality and sleep
The ideals we try to keep
Crashing down, underground
Too late we’re already fallen to deep
Between life and death
What have we left?
But splintered dreams
The ghost of ourselves
The loss of lives
Injustice thrives
Will there never be an end?
So this is nowhere near a complete song, its a total mess but I've had so many raw lyrics jumping around my head i wanted to get them down and when i did i found i really wanted to share them to see what people make of them. now like i said theses are just raw lyrics they haven't been put together in any particularly meaningful way though i think it's pretty easy to say the song thats going to result from theses is going to be pretty critical / sad.
so yeah....what do people think? what lines do you think work well? what doesn't work well? i value feedback on this kind of stuff so much! so do let me know what you think.
so yeah....what do people think? what lines do you think work well? what doesn't work well? i value feedback on this kind of stuff so much! so do let me know what you think.
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I think it looks good, so far!