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Not quite a fairy tailMy story could be called a fairy tale. But if you call it that you have to remember not all fairy tales end happily. After all the little match girl froze to death and the wolfs family starved because of the axe man.

No my story isn't a happy one, but if you pay attention you might see the sun glint between the clouds now and then. It started the moment I was born. No. before, when my mother lay awake deep in the night. Strange creatures appeared at the windows. Creatures half one things and half anther, creatures that crawled and slithered.
They where there when I was born, not that I saw them mind, but I've been told. I've heard the stori

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Hero's deathby ~Twimper

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so this was a pic that i've been meaning to finsh for ages of my carrie taro dieing a hero's death. i gotta say im not happy with it, but if i hadn't finshed it now i never wouldhave done.

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any way yeah...i am still doing art! keep feath!

~Kearrice Oct 9, 2011 Student Traditional Artist

Nice

good shading on the body

~Twimper Oct 10, 2011 General Artist

hehe thanks ^_^ it got a bit blurred as i kept resting my hand on it >_<

~Kearrice Oct 15, 2011 Student Traditional Artist

nah it's good

~Grim-away Dec 4, 2009

This is very well done! Your pencil drawings are amazing!

~Twimper Dec 4, 2009 General Artist

hehe thanks grim ^_^

~Grim-away Dec 4, 2009

You're welcome!!

~Kaboodleschmitt Nov 16, 2009 Hobbyist General Artist

Beautiful detail. Both the background and the muscle structure and such - quite nice.

One thing I don't like so much is that it looks sorta faded in places - not sure if this is the scan's fault or just what, but hmm.

~Twimper Nov 19, 2009 General Artist

yeah

i was useing a scrap of papper to lean on so i didnt smudge it but the papper smudged it....so fail.

~Kaboodleschmitt Nov 19, 2009 Hobbyist General Artist

Aww :/

!Fiverart Nov 10, 2009

This is really good hun, I love the detail in the background, and the soft graphite shading works really well as a contrast with the graphic nature of the piece. I like the "alone" nature of this, like loneliness in death. (Natch, I'm beginning to sound like an emo philosopher

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There are a few things you could add to make it have even more of an impact; there would be a lot more blood, although I realise you might want it to be a little more PG - he would have blood on his back, possibly the corner of his lips and splashed upon the floor/legs - sounds gory but it's quite a big injury!

The demarcation between him (especially on the face) and the background isn't amazingly clear, he would stand out a bit more if there was a clearer line

Other than that the pose and proportions are done really well - lovely pic!

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